Monday, May 18, 2009

Donnybrook

There are arguments
There are words
Like waterfalls pouring out of the heart
Like fire burning down all blinds
Buried and forgotten deeds
Unearthed with linkers
Like envisaging water
In a sucked out bottle

The conversation goes on
Tireless and weary 
Like an epic taking twists and turns
Like the overlong braid of Rapunzel
A break
At the dusk of events
Glistening drops follow
And liquescent hearts couple
 

3 comments:

  1. i love that your writing baby..
    really great poetry

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  2. I think its a really nice one, really! Dark and bright at the same time, kinda explosive and with a happy ending (love happy endings! :P)

    Kida being through this (if i got it right) few times in my life, remembering those moments helped me to answer to your song with my own song, same melody, different lyrics... or the other way around ;) Here i go... not trying to beat the master thou! ^_^

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    Non said words of past deeds
    burst like a storm of dust drops,
    memories perverted, feelings gone,
    two branches dancing the wrong song.

    The music signs and the night goes on,
    silences filled with loud notes,
    two souls forgetting where they belong,
    reaching nowhere, not letting go.

    But the hours tick in their hearts clock
    and the shouts leave to find true peace,
    becoming rivers of inner drops,
    that crying dance a renewing song.

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  3. PS: Awwwww it feel so good to write again!!! Thank youuuuuu!!! :D And i love this one a lot ^_^

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